Your project was fantastic. I really enjoyed your bucket list and your confidence of doing them. One thing you could of worked on was your tone changed as your recording changes. I would give you a 98%
I absolutely loved your photos. Your "first pitch" photos were among my favorites. That sandwich was gross; I had to chuckle at that picture. It is easy to see that you put time into chosing your selections. I loved your originality. Your enthusiasm about your choices came through. You gave a good discussion of each of your selections. Your voice volume was not always consistent. You gave an excellent introduction, but did not give a closing. Your citation page was well done. 98%
Your project was fantastic. I really enjoyed your bucket list and your confidence of doing them.
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I absolutely loved your photos. Your "first pitch" photos were among my favorites. That sandwich was gross; I had to chuckle at that picture. It is easy to see that you put time into chosing your selections. I loved your originality. Your enthusiasm about your choices came through. You gave a good discussion of each of your selections. Your voice volume was not always consistent. You gave an excellent introduction, but did not give a closing. Your citation page was well done. 98%
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